Hi, thanks for sending in this video firstly you’re doing very well considering you haven’t been playing long,the basic technique is starting to build. I agree you are slightly leading with your shoulder, I think this is because you need to try to active the lower part of your arm and elbow brushing through a bit more.
You are using the body well to weight transfer but I feel you can rotate back more bringing your right shoulder back and turn from the hips and shoulders before rotating back when hitting the ball. Also keeping your arm slightly more relaxed and loose especially from the elbow down will make things look and feel more natural.
Overall I’m impressed with your technical skills, so focus on thise bits I’ve mentioned and also just keeping a smooth and fluid action to the shot.
Let us know if you need further advice or of course feel free to send more videos!
