Hi Neil!
Ive a had a good look at both videos and firstly you are doing extremely well for the amount of time you have been playing so well done!
Overall the technical side of things isn’t bad, there are few things I would suggest to focus on which will help you improve further. The main things are keeping more stable with your feet on the ground, it’s good to adjust your feet and stay on your toes but often as you hit the ball you almost jump slightly which makes you lose control, so as you hit the ball really focus on having both feet on the ground and twisting with your body.
Also try to keep bat high between strokes to save time, and make sure you are contacting the ball in front of you slightly but not reaching forwards with your arm, allow the ball to come through to you slightly more.
Lastly just stay relaxed with your arm and body and keep the shot short, your technique will keep improving and then you have to trust it and make sure you are stable and balanced to keep up the consistency.
These are all quote small things but they will help! Let us know how you get on, but its looking good so keep working hard and we’re here to help 🙂
